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Feature story on state tournament bound team

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by ConorRevell, Mar 13, 2013.

  1. ConorRevell

    ConorRevell New Member

    I did a feature story on one of our teams going to the KHSAA (Kentucky)Girls Basketball Sweet 16. They have 10 losses and overcame a lot of adversity this season. Let me know what you think of this story. My biggest concern is that it's too long. Should I have broken this up into two parts? Feel free to criticize and offer advice for the future.
     
  2. slartibartfast

    slartibartfast New Member

    Where is the story?
     
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