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I added this long-form piece to my weekend reading

Discussion in 'Journalism topics only' started by Irvin Magic Favre, Mar 24, 2018.

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  1. Irvin Magic Favre

    Irvin Magic Favre New Member

    Kacy Sager launched her new website this week with a long-form piece I will take the time to read.
    If you have covered high school basketball, you will relate to it.
    I'd like to know what you think about the story and the presentation.

    Coach David vs Goliath
     
    Irvin Magic Favre, Mar 24, 2018
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  2. LanceyHoward

    LanceyHoward Well-Known Member

    The story needs a better introduction. There are 21,000 high schools in America. In the first fourteen paragraphs she describes her drive to a high school in rural Georgia, the physical appearance of the school and the name of the coach. Why should I care about this high school or this coach?
     
    Last edited: Mar 25, 2018
    LanceyHoward, Mar 24, 2018
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