Travel narrative

I wrote a first-person travel narrative a few months back that I'd really like to get some feedback on. I don't want to post it here because it's pretty long (about 2,000 words) and it could out me. I would love feedback on it though, because it's the only narrative-style story I've ever written for publication, even if it's not really journalistic.

Please PM me if you're willing to give it a read. Thanks.

P.S. Even if the writing sucks, I promise the story itself is interesting, if that's any incentive.

 

dud -

Please feel free to PM me. Thanks.