I try to post here once a year or so. I'd love feedback on this. This was written for a national audience for a soccer specific readership. It's...
Thanks. If I explained who Danny Dichio was to my audience I'd be seen as being really, really condescending. This isn't written for a general...
It's been a while since I looked for feedback. It's also been a while since I wrote for a (more) traditional outlet. So... Note: It's written...
Re: Beautiful gold, so-so silver and shameful bronze: The running Olympics threa Bolt will become Tiger rich from this Olympics. He hardly needs...
Re: Beautiful gold, so-so silver and shameful bronze: The running Olympics threa 19.30 seconds > than Phelps' eight golds. (just one man's...
The Boston Globe's website reads: Nobody's Perfect Super Shocker: Giants beat Pats 17-14 to win Super Bowl
Normally, you'd be right. But, the attempt at a perfect season makes the Patriots loss the story here. To me, the balance is writing something...
I was going to suggest that, but thought it might be too cliche...But, my inner geek loves it. A perfect...upset Giants shock Pats to win Super Bowl
Thank you.
This a is just a typical story...it's been about six months since I was last critiqued, so I thought it would be worthwhile to post something....
Both are used, but--at least according to a Google news search--"assistant" is used more often than "alternate" (168 hits to 95). Which, as...
So does my telephone book. Is someone going to go after Ma Bell next? Good God (literally, likely).
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