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My editing pet peeve - what's yours?

Discussion in 'Journalism topics only' started by Moderator1, Mar 23, 2008.

  1. Barsuk

    Barsuk Active Member

    Really, spnited? Time, date, place has been the style at every paper I've worked at (and, yes, I realize that's only three papers, but still).
     
  2. forever_town

    forever_town Well-Known Member

    More than the what, give me the why.

    Why should it be time, date place and not date, time place?
     
  3. shotglass

    shotglass Guest

    Always been a standard here. I don't have a "why," though.
     
  4. spnited

    spnited Active Member

    I don't think it's really a big deal one way or the other but to me the most important thing is the day, not the time.
     
  5. forever_town

    forever_town Well-Known Member

    I've never given that "rule" much -- or any -- thought. Not even now that I've compiled style manuals for three different newspapers in my life (granted, two were college niche publications at The Big University With The Prominent J-School, but still).

    Such a rule has never crossed my mind. And I'd like to think that such a rule should have a logical reason behind it.
     
  6. shotglass

    shotglass Guest

    Yeah, but time-date-place is a more fluid wording.

    "They play next at 3 p.m. Friday in Tokyo."

    "They play next on Friday at 3 p.m. in Tokyo."
     
  7. spnited

    spnited Active Member

    Unless it's a tournament of some kind, when they play next probably doesn't belong in the story anyway.
     
  8. m2spts

    m2spts Member

    My pet peeve is editors who over edit, think they're writers and change for change sake. Standard operating procedure at too many places nowadays.
     
  9. shotglass

    shotglass Guest

    OK ... "The meeting will be held at 7 p.m. April 4 at spnited's secret headquarters."

    m2, the trouble with that is it's a grey area. A certain amount of copy editing IS necessary. Too much IS bad. But somebody's got to make the decision of how much.
     
  10. forever_town

    forever_town Well-Known Member

    I would think it'd be more logical to think DATE, then time and place.

    Tell me an event happens at 3 p.m. and I'm like "Today?" or "Shit! Did I miss it?" Tell me an event happens on Friday, then I'm just like, "OK, what time?"

    I'd rather learn the date first, then the time.
     
  11. spnited

    spnited Active Member

    Actually, shot, the meeting will be (held in not necessary) April 4 at 7 p.m. at spnited's headquarters.
     
  12. Tom Petty

    Tom Petty Guest

    maybe your editor over-edits your writing because you churn out shit.
    ever consider that?
     
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