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He got the hearing aids at 6 and cochlear implant at 11. I definitely did not indicate the growth of hsi hearing ability through the process well. Before the aids he could hear next to nothing.With the hearing aids he learned to hear, though people had to really talk directly to him. His ability to lip read also helped during that phase.

Then with the cochlear he was able to hear very well, close to perfectly. He could make out more subtle noises (like the fizz of a soda can, for example). Looking back though, this development was not at clearly described as it should have been.