Smash Williams
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The story was heartwrenching, and it was incredibly brave for the author to reveal himself like that.
The headline is hackneyed and almost turned me off to the story before I got there. I get that it doesn't want to give away the punchline, but jeez. That said, it's s student paper, and things like that are part of the learning process. Hope whoever wrote it improves with time and seasoning. And once you get to the story, the headline doesn't matter anymore.
The headline is hackneyed and almost turned me off to the story before I got there. I get that it doesn't want to give away the punchline, but jeez. That said, it's s student paper, and things like that are part of the learning process. Hope whoever wrote it improves with time and seasoning. And once you get to the story, the headline doesn't matter anymore.