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Hi, I'm new, this is my first post, ergo my first stupid question

New member Austin sprouted a big Bonds head as an avatar during the past 12 hours or so. PEDs?
 
Not my hed. It was the kid's. And it wasn't a hed, it was a skybox. But I get the point. Thanks for the responses.

HH, that logo you described would have made a better skybox.
 
While we're at it... you can delete the word new. It's implied with "begin"

Um, unless they're beginning their old season. (?!)

Another tip about redundancies (for future use): if you ever write about someone breaking a world record - do NOT say the athlete set a NEW world record. It's a world record. Period. There can only be one, unless the athlete just tied the world record. But even then, it's not a new mark, just a tie. Fwiw

And a quarterback completed passes to eight receivers, not eight different receivers. Or maybe he completed them to eight receivers but two of them were the same guy.
 
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I have a huge pet peeve with headlines that turn a sport into an object. It's just poor writing.

Your hed makes me think of a basketball with a Gators logo, sitting there with eyes, a nose and a mouth, living, breathing.

And Gremlin, it's "Mustangs basketball team," assuming there's more than one Mustang. Otherwise, it's not a team -- it's an individual.

I agree and it was one of the first things that was driven into my head in college. It's still a challenge to get some of the reporters on staff to understand/remember this rule.
 

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