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Maybe it's just me, but the comma placement lends itself to multiple interpretations of the sentence. Which I think is funny.
 
Mighty_Wingman said:
Maybe it's just me, but the comma placement lends itself to multiple interpretations of the sentence. Which I think is funny.
I thought the pause was in there for effect, too.
 
Mr R,

Three hrs on, half hr off, four shifts a day to deadline, which is Tuesday thanks to Canada Day. (I've overshot the word count, so I'll be spending a week or two cutting. (Gutting?)

By the way, the Sterling-Smallwood-Fidel deal is supposed to have been a big influence on the guy who made Roger and Me and whose name escapes me at this moment.

YHS, etc
 

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